One of the most difficult things to deal with when writing a novel is getting feedback, whether this is from a friend, a beta reader or an editor. Honestly – it can be completely terrifying. I know this from experience having written two books myself. The first experience I had of getting feedback on a piece of fiction was when I began studying for my master’s in creative writing. A huge part of the course was the workshop. We took it in turns to send a few chapters of our WIPs to everyone in the group and then a week or so later we would gather (online) to discuss that writing. The first time it was my turn I actually felt physically sick. I was terrified that the other students would hate my work, that they would destroy it. So, as an editor, I do completely understand how nerve-wracking it is to get that feedback. And sometimes it’s not only terrifying, it’s also confusing, especially when two or more of your readers or editors have completely different opinions about your work. So how do you deal with feedback?
Feedback from Beta Readers
So you’ve sent out your manuscript to five beta readers and you have five conflicting opinions about it. What should you do?
First, step back and coolly asses your betas. Whose opinion do you really trust? If one of them is your mum, then she’s probably not the one to go with.
Then go with your gut – you know if someone’s comments rings true, if something makes you think ‘Oh yeah. That’s a good point’. You need to be honest with yourself.
Look for common threads. If three of your betas hate the same thing, but one loves it, then it’s probably safe to go with the majority.
Feedback from Editors
Again, take a step back. Yes, that’s difficult; your work is so personal to you, so much a part of you. But feedback is vital to improve your craft. So put the process into perspective. Your editor is (hopefully) trying to help you. Their criticisms (if they’re any good) should be constructive. Trust me, when I give feedback on a manuscript, I’m not trying to hurt your feelings, or upset you or belittle you. But it would do you no good whatsoever if I wasn’t honest. I want to help you. So bear that in mind and try to be objective when you look at feedback.
Make sure you understand what your editor is trying to tell you. If you don’t understand their comments or you need some clarification, then ask. Personally, I feel that if a writer comes back to me about a point I’ve raised, then it’s my job to address their concerns. Just because I’ve finished the edit, it doesn’t mean I can no longer answer questions or provide feedback. A caveat though – don’t take advantage of your editor’s good nature; ask a question, accept the answer, but don’t expect a long-running dialogue. And don’t argue either – you’ve asked me for my professional opinion, I’ve given it and I’ve given my reasons for that opinion. It serves no purpose if you don’t agree for us to have back and forth emails about it.
Remember – you own the story. You don’t have to do what your editor says. It’s entirely up to you. But do remember that your editor is not your enemy. We don’t sit there trying to pick faults – we want to help you make your manuscript the best it can be. So if we say something you don’t agree with, take a deep breath, read the criticism again and really think about it. Does your editor have a point?
Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Not an easy subject, and harder still to get your head around. The fact that we signed up for all this torture doesn’t help at all…
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Yep – why do we do that…
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Thanks for this helpful reminder! As a writer, I’m always so invested in my words that it takes a real effort to step back – far back – so I can see what my critic is trying to tell me!
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Wise words … when my mentor wrote ‘you really have lost the plot here, love’ on one of my early manuscripts, I cried my eyes out, then I rang her up and we both laughed our heads off! Has to be done. 🙂
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How fabulous to have someone who’ll tell it to you straight! 🙂
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She is totally fabulous Alison, a doyen. She’s also told me she’ll shoot me if there’s another movie star in one of my novels … my new leading man is a fading rock star instead! (I’m a goner!)
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Reblogged this on Author Don Massenzio and commented:
Check out this great post from Alison Williams Writing blog on using feedback as a writer.
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The more I read about the pains of writing, the more I start to regret that I started to write. I have to face the fact that I’m a person who is that simply doesn’t have what it takes to ever show what I am writing. Still, I really appreciate these posts, the tips and shared knowledge.
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This was a great blast from the past and is super useful too. I myself still feel the sting from comments, but thankfully, I’ve worked under a particularly harsh editor once, and ever since, I’ve managed to detach from my work. Anyway, thanks for this post!
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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