Charles Dickens was born on this day in 1812. One of my favourite writers, he has a lot to teach us today (and some of his compassion and philanthropy wouldn’t go amiss either).
I wrote this post about opening lines a few years ago, but Dickens was the master of them, so in celebration of his birthday, here it is again.
The opening line for your novel must draw your reader in. They should read that first line and think: I need to read this book. I want to know what happens.
So how do you create a great first line? That’s a difficult thing to try and explain. The best thing to do, as with most things, is to read. And when you read, think about your reaction to that opening line. Do you want to read on? If so, why? And if not, why not? I can do no better, though, than to share these wonderful first lines:
“It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to Heaven, we were all going direct the other way.”
Charles Dickens: A Tale Of Two Cities (1859)
“It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.”
George Orwell: Nineteen Eighty-Four (1949)
“You better not never tell nobody but God.”
Alice Walker: The Color Purple (1982)
“It was a queer, sultry summer, the summer they electrocuted the Rosenbergs, and I didn’t know what I was doing in New York.”
Sylvia Plath: The Bell Jar (1963)
“It was love at first sight. The first time Yossarian saw the chaplain he fell madly in love with him.”
Joseph Heller: Catch-22 (1961)
“I am a camera with its shutter open, quite passive, recording, not thinking.”
Christopher Isherwood: Goodbye To Berlin (1939)
“I write this sitting in the kitchen sink.”
Dodie Smith: I Capture the Castle (1948)
“Mother died today. Or maybe, yesterday; I can’t be sure.”
Albert Camus: The Stranger (1946)
“If you really want to hear about it, the first thing you’ll probably want to know is where I was born, and what my lousy childhood was like, and how my parents were occupied and all before they had me, and all that David Copperfield kind of crap, but I don’t feel like going into it, if you want to know the truth.”
J.D Salinger: The Catcher In The Rye (1951)
Got a favourite opening line? Share it by leaving a comment below.
Here’s a recent one.
“The secretary is the most dangerous person in the room.”
The Secretary by Renee Knight (Due out Feb 21st 2019)
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Sounds intriguing – I’ll look out for your review.
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Another often quoted one, particularly in South Africa is ‘Cry the Beloved Country’. It is striking, even with the repetition of ‘lovely’, which I would have edited out:
“There is a lovely road that runs from Ixopo into the hills. These hills are grass-covered and rolling, and they are lovely beyond any singing of it. The road climbs seven miles into them, to Carisbrooke; and from there, if there is no mist, you look down on one of the fairest valleys of Africa.”
and
“HERE is Edward Bear, coming downstairs now, bump, bump, bump…”
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Thanks for reminding me of the opening lines you listed. Just about my favorite is this one:
“The past is a foreign country: they do things differently there.” – L P Hartley
This is so evocative for me on several levels, and all the more as I get older!
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That’s a really intriguing opening line – thanks so much for sharing.
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Yes. That’s one of mine. too.
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This caught my attention immediately…
‘I was Mordwand of the Brigantes. Called Dead and cast out when I was alive.’ from The Cunning Woman’s Cup by Sue Hewitt
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Heard a lot of good things about this book – shall definiteley pop in on the ever expanding TBR list 🙂
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‘I’ve got six sisters. They’re Witches. Real Witches. So far they claim to have killed quite a few people. Here’s some examples.’ from Six Black Candles by Des Dillon.
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Ooh, that’s going on the TBR list 🙂
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog and commented:
Call over to Alison’s original blog post and let her know YOUR favourite opening lines 😃
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Reblogged this on suzannebowditch and commented:
Great post by Alison Williams Writing, on Dickens himself, and good first lines 🙂
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Last night I dreamt I went to Manderley again. Rebecca by Daphne Du Maurier
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I was about to add that one – especially as reading Rebecca at the moment. So, I’ll add: In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
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Great post and examples! 🙂
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All great opening lines. I also particularly like the opening lines to A tale of two cities.
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“Like most small children, I learned my home address so that if I got lost, I could tell a grownup where to take me. In kindergarten, when the teacher asked where I lived, I could recite the address without skipping a beat, even though my mother changed addresses frequently, for reasons I never understood as a child.” From Hillbilly Elegy by J.D. Vance —- Suzanne
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Reblogged this on Author Don Massenzio and commented:
Check out this great post on Charles Dickens wonderful opening lines in celebration of his birthday in this post from Alison Williams Writing Blog.
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Call me Ishmael.
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I must make a study of opening lines, then perhaps mile will improve.
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Here’s an interesting article on the subject with some analysis. https://www.theguardian.com/culture/gallery/2012/apr/29/ten-best-first-lines-fiction
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In an old house in Paris
that was covered in vines
lived twelve little girls
in two straight lines.
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Lovely 🙂
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Recently reread I Capture the Castle and really enjoyed it – it’s funny that after reading the whole book, I wouldn’t have been able to remember what that line was, but it sets the scene so well.
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It’s a lovely book – keep meaning to read it again.
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