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I’ve worked with lots of writers who can compose the most beautiful prose, bring scenes to vivid life, make me care about their characters, keep me turning the page, but these same writers find one thing almost impossible to do – they can’t write a synopsis.
What is it about a synopsis that has so many writers struggling? It doesn’t seem to matter how great a writer you are, there’s just something about condensing your masterpiece down into one or two sides of A4 that strikes fear into a writer’s heart.
And I think that’s the issue. As authors, we spend so long on our books, every last detail is important to us. A synopsis asks us to get to the heart of the story, to strip away to the bare bones – and that can be really hard when you are so close to the world you’ve created and the characters that live there.
So what should, and what shouldn’t, you include?
- First of all, check what the agent/publisher is looking for. They may well specify a length and may want you to write a chapter by chapter synopsis. If there are no specifications, then I would advise sticking to one page, single-spaced, six hundred words maximum.
- Remember to write in third person (even if your novel is written in first person).
- Use active voice and present tense.
Now to the actual writing of the synopsis itself.
When I was studying literature, we learnt a lot about narrative structure, and although it might not initially seem like it, most novels do fit into this basic structure:
- Set up – main characters introduced. Introduction of the problem.
- Conflict – the main body of the story. There is a catalyst that sets the conflict in motion. Characters go through changes because of this conflict and develop – the character arc.
- Resolution – the problem is confronted and solved – or not – and loose ends are tied up.
To write your synopsis, it is really helpful to look at your novel in these terms and break it down into this structure.
- Start with the set up – who is the protagonist? The other main characters? What is the problem?
- Then move on to the conflict – there may be more than one. Decide what conflicts, plot twists and turns are really important; what do you need to include for the ending, the resolution, to make sense? How does this conflict change the main characters?
- Finish with the resolution. Remember – this isn’t a blurb. The agent/publisher needs to know how your novel ends.
Remember:
- Don’t get caught up in too much detail. Think about what’s really important.
- Don’t include lots of backstory – you don’t have the space.
- Be short, concise, clear. This isn’t the time for showing off your beautiful prose. That’s what the sample chapters are for.
Agents/publishers are looking for something new, something exciting – if your novel has that (and it should) then make sure your synopsis makes that clear.
And please, please, please remember that this is not a blurb. You MUST include the ending.
Good luck!
Very good advice, thanks Alison.
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Thanks Alison – may I use this for my students? Jx
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Of course Judith – and thanks for the reblog 🙂
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Many thanks, Alison. Jx
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Reblogged this on Judith Barrow.
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Great Advice as it can be challenging…
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Thank you 🙂
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Great tips about writing a synopsis. 🙂
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Thanks!
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Excellent. I wonder if there’s an exemplar somewhere, a well known story condensed or synopsis?
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That would be great wouldn’t it? I shall have to dig around…
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This is EXACTLY what I needed to read about today. You have no idea how helpful this is. Thank you! 😀
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog.
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Thanks so much for reblogging!
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Welcome Alison – Great post 😀
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One of the perks of being self published, is that you don’t need a synopsis or cover letter. YES!!
But I entered a competition the other day which wanted a 1 page synopsis along with the full novel. So it looks like there’s no way out of writing one after all.
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Well, actually you need a synopsis for your Amazon and iBooks page to sell your book. Readers need that synopsis to buy your book.
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That blurb is much easier to write because you are trying to entice the reader and you don’t have to give away the ending.
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As Suzanne says, you need a blurb for your Amazon and iBook page – something to entice the reader, rather than a synopsis which should give the outline of the whole story, including the ending.
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As i’ve just discovered – it’s really hard.
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Good luck with the competition Suzanne 🙂
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Thank you.
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Even more challenging? Reduce your entire novel to a one sentence pitch. Once you do that, the synopsis is much easier to write. For instance: “An obsessed sea captain pursues a white whale across the ocean, putting his crew at risk.” or “A paranoid bombadier discovers there’s never one last mission to fly before his tour ends.”
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Wow I love your examples. I cant imagine what an obsessed captain wld do to risk his crew…wld go for it if was a book. Or is it?
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Very good advice – my blog on finishing a novel –
https://tomhocknell.wordpress.com/2015/10/12/the-end-of-writing-finishing-a-novel/
did not even contemplate the synopsis. The elevator pitch is a good thing to consider, which normally happens perfectly when telling a cabbie drunk on way home, and that you can’t recall in the morning.
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Reblogged this on new2writing and commented:
A lot of really good structured advice on writing a good synopsis here…
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Thank you so much for the reblog 🙂
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Reblogged this on Writer's Treasure Chest and commented:
Thank you very much Allison Williams for this excellent blog post on how to write a synopsis! Every bit, every word, every single advice helps us beginners. I’m grateful!
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You’re very welcome – and thank you for reblogging.
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It was my honor and pleasure to do so. This is an important topic and no matter how much I read about writing a synopsis, it still scares me.
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Excellent. I needed this.
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Thank you – glad you found it helpful.
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Excellent advice, beautifully condensed.
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Thank you Hilary.
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I think we have to remember as well that the synopsis is another opportunity to show off our writing skills, and the agent will be looking for this. If it’s just a dull series of ‘and then this happens, and then that happens’, your manuscript may never get opened. In fact, even the query letter is an example of the writers skill these days.
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Wonderful advice. I’ll definitely utilize this when I’m writing my synopses! 😀
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Thank you – good luck!
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Reblogged this on 23 Days of Writing.
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Thanks for the reblog 🙂
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I loved the straightforward directions you give. I’ll definitely use this when I write a synopsis.
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Thank you – glad you found it helpful 🙂
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Am the worst st synopsis. But this is a nice review
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Thank you 🙂
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That is some fantastic advice. I’ll admit to being one of those people who is terrible at writing a synopsis. This should prove extremely helpful to me in the future.
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Thank you – so glad you found it helpful 🙂
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Great blog and some sound advice. I’ll definitely be using this as a template when it comes time for me to write a working synopsis 🙂
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Thanks – hope it helps 🙂
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Thank you:) This is really hard for me, so it’s helpful to get some insight!
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This is great advice. I’m currently prepping my first book and the synopsis was an area I had a few questions about. Keeping the length to a page or two is definitely a must but I hadn’t really thought of the structure. Great post! Really informative.
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Thank you 🙂 Good luck with the book.
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Reblogged this on Bridget OToole's Online Portfolio and commented:
Explained synopsis writing better than any of my professors. A definite go-to for the future!
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Thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on angelakaysbooks.
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This is very helpful. I think it’s something that people just assume should be easy
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Great post, when I get to this stage I will certainly come back to this post. Thank you for sharing your wisdom!
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Extremely helpful! This helped my writing immensely.
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You make an excellent point. I think part of beginners writing courses should be (at least) a weekly warm up of writing a synopsis. It’s hard when you’re used to telling a longer story, but writing a synopsis is a lot easier to do and then expand then vice versa. It also teaches people to focus in on the core elements of their works, which makes people better writers over all and can lead to you seeing flaws.
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Good advice!
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Woow this was so helpful. You hit the nail right on the head there. I will definitely follow your guidelines, thank you so much!
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You’re very welcome – so pleased it was helpful 🙂
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Thank you for this. I’m embarking on my first novel, via NaNoWriMo! I was surprised to be asked to write a synopsis for the story,on their site, for which I have only the vaguest of plans. But I realise that making a synopsis as you suggest, and describe so well, will be of great help to keep me focused. Thanks again.
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You’re very welcome 🙂 Good luck with NaNoWriMo!
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I have to admit to having had pretty serious problems with making a synopsis for my book, every time I tried it came out closer to a book blurb than a synopsis. This is excellent advice, I very much appreciate the effort you put in here.
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Thank you – glad it helped 🙂
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Very helpful!
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Thank you 🙂
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This was so helpful, and I read it at just the right time. I am freaking out because I have to write an outline/synopsis for my story, and I didn’t know how or where to start. This helped so much. Thank you.
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You’re very welcome – so glad it was helpful. Good luck with your writing.
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Thanks for this great how-to post. Synopsis are the worst…
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Excellent advice. You really nail the key reason why authors struggle to write a good synopsis. Thanks for the great insight into synopsis-writing!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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